Comments on: Short Story http://dharmasphere.org/2005/06/15/short-story/ The change is coming Tue, 02 Dec 2008 13:06:47 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.7-beta3-9909 hourly 1 By: jyotirmaya http://dharmasphere.org/2005/06/15/short-story/comment-page-1/#comment-62 jyotirmaya Thu, 30 Jun 2005 21:28:02 +0000 http://www.dharmasphere.org/2005/06/15/short-story/#comment-62 nice, reminds me of an experience I once had while out alone in the mountains flyfishing..... I look forward to reading more of this characters adventures... nice,
reminds me of an experience I once had while out alone in the mountains flyfishing…..
I look forward to reading more of this characters adventures…

]]> By: becci http://dharmasphere.org/2005/06/15/short-story/comment-page-1/#comment-61 becci Thu, 23 Jun 2005 18:16:32 +0000 http://www.dharmasphere.org/2005/06/15/short-story/#comment-61 I read this a few days ago but didn't make a comment. Yesterday I was walking to college, enjoying the blissful sunshine and feeling in love with nature. Suddenly I had the memory of a passage in a story I'd read recently, a man recollecting his childhood, taking photots of the most seemingly mundane things - a dandelion in a field, a tree - and his simple confusion when his school friends don't like the pictures. I loved the line 'I was too young to be pretentious'. But <i> where </i><i> had I read that? </i><i> Ah </i><i> Thank you for sharing </i> I read this a few days ago but didn’t make a comment.
Yesterday I was walking to college, enjoying the blissful sunshine and feeling in love with nature. Suddenly I had the memory of a passage in a story I’d read recently, a man recollecting his childhood, taking photots of the most seemingly mundane things - a dandelion in a field, a tree - and his simple confusion when his school friends don’t like the pictures.
I loved the line ‘I was too young to be pretentious’.

But where had I read that?
 Ah

Thank you for sharing

]]> By: Madhava http://dharmasphere.org/2005/06/15/short-story/comment-page-1/#comment-57 Madhava Mon, 20 Jun 2005 15:03:55 +0000 http://www.dharmasphere.org/2005/06/15/short-story/#comment-57 I enjoyed reading this ... very beautifully written in places, keep writing, you have good potential. I enjoyed reading this … very beautifully written in places, keep writing, you have good potential.

]]> By: Prem http://dharmasphere.org/2005/06/15/short-story/comment-page-1/#comment-54 Prem Fri, 17 Jun 2005 13:40:55 +0000 http://www.dharmasphere.org/2005/06/15/short-story/#comment-54 Thank you for sharing this, Amal. It is a great little insight into your character's day - from the pits of revulsion to the heights of realisation. Very nicely done. I look forward to reading more. Thank you for sharing this, Amal. It is a great little insight into your character’s day - from the pits of revulsion to the heights of realisation. Very nicely done.

I look forward to reading more.

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