Time on the Edge

Star

Time soars on the edge of the sun,
The lights flare, then are gone.
Body surrendered, battle done
Your friend remains the only ONE.

3 Things Said:

  1. Gravatar Roshnii says...

    Short, snappy and fiery. I like it.


  2. Gravatar Jyotirmaya says...

    This is a new type of poetry I am experimenting with - called “cube”.
    Kind of like haiku for the cartesian era…..
    the 3 dimensions are as follows:-
    4 lines
    4 rhymes
    4 beats/line


  3. Gravatar Prem says...

    Cuboid poetry. Like it!


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