Time on the Edge

Posted on October 27, 2005 by Jyotirmaya

Star

Time soars on the edge of the sun,
The lights flare, then are gone.
Body surrendered, battle done
Your friend remains the only ONE.

About Jyotirmaya

I am no one and everyone. Been that way for a long time too. Just sometimes i forget.
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3 Responses to Time on the Edge

  1. Roshnii says:
    October 29, 2005 at 3:04 pm

    Short, snappy and fiery. I like it.

  2. Jyotirmaya says:
    October 29, 2005 at 3:46 pm

    This is a new type of poetry I am experimenting with – called “cube”.
    Kind of like haiku for the cartesian era…..
    the 3 dimensions are as follows:-
    4 lines
    4 rhymes
    4 beats/line

  3. Prem says:
    October 29, 2005 at 4:12 pm

    Cuboid poetry. Like it!